i wont give a shit

By void

i killed myself last night
just to see if you cared
when they told you i died
you didnt look sad or angry
you almost looked happy in a way
i convinced myself that you loved me
even though i knew it wasn't true
how could it be when nothing matters to you?
you don't care about anything
except money, sex, and drugs
i can't believe it took so long
to understand that's all it was
but everything is done now
it's all over with
and now i know that when you die
i won't give a shit

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Copyright 2004 alex stefanski
Published on Tuesday, November 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Atalanta On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, Atalanta (37)By person wrote:

    This is very good. I too know the feeling of loving someone and knowing that they don't love you back. Almost nothing hurts as much as that.

  • A former member wrote: It seems like you contradicted yourself alittle with this one but other then that nicely done

  • void On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, void (35)By person wrote:

    it was supposed to be like my spirit wont give a shit. but yea it does sound like contridiction now that i think about it. thank you

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