I Care

By Juggalotus

The water keeps dripping
It's always been there
My sanity it's stripping
Wish to say I don't care
But I can't because I do
And I rant because of you
You may think I don't feel
But what I feel is real
How do you feel? Wish I knew, what's the deal
Why am I blue, if my heart is of steal
Why am I still there, if I don't care
Why can't I stop if my feelings I forgot
I haven't forgot, I still feel the love
Maybe you can't remember
My feelings, so slender
So my head, you dismember
Because YOU forgot
I'm still holding on
And now I will rot
When you did the wrong

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Copyright 2004 Juggalotus
Published on Thursday, January 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: very well executed

  • A former member wrote: Relatable.. Well written and meaningful. Keep it up(:

  • A former member wrote: Written straight from the soul... Very Nice.

  • A former member wrote: Loved it, very well done

  • void On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, void (35)By person wrote:

    i loved this main. it was fucking awesome. ~V~

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Hmmmm. Well done. I really liked the end. Very powerful. great write.

  • yslehc On Thursday, January 29, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    nice write.. i hate when people forget things that are meant to be remembered

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