The Music In My Ear
By Bloody_Hands
My head nods to the music
Pulsing through my being
A smile curves my lips
As I sing along silently
Whispered words are spoken
And fingers are pointed
Rumors are spread
And promises are broken
They stare at me
And they do not hear
The soft words in my head
The pounding of the beat
The cry for revenge
A smile curves my lips
As I stare into their faces
I see them move away
None want to touch me
They fear me and my music
They do not understand
The way the beat goes
The music falls upon them
Upon their deaf ears
A smile curves my lips
As I whisper the words
They catch bits and phrases
And move away from me
They do not wish to hear
What they do not know
But here I stand alone
With the music in my ear
A grin forms my lips
And I tell them what they are
I get glares and rude comments
But I care not anymore
The music fills my ears
Fills my mind and Soul
It consumes my body
All that I am
A smile curves my lips
As I stand here alone
Music pulsing everywhere
But no one else can hear
They wish not to see
They wish not to hear
They wish not to feel
They wish not to know
They wish not to have
The music in their ear
Comments on "The Music In My Ear"
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, void
(35) wrote:
amazing
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On Saturday, November 1, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
This grabbed me and pulled me into an ecstatic trance of music..you've perfectly the presence of music and effects...This write is amazing...nice job.
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On Thursday, October 9, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
haunting...gripping i like it
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A former member wrote:
ooh. I really like this poem. It has a rhythm and a beat to it that makes me want to nod *my* head. and the repetition with "A smile curves my lips" keeps it flowing.
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On Friday, August 29, 2003, Diva_Satanica
(74) wrote:
well i like this one it is good..and lil girl..shyt gonna bug everyone nomatter what..so no use bitching bout anything.-D.S
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On Thursday, August 28, 2003, Liz
(265) wrote:
Rumors. Mispelling in works bugs me. It also kinda bugs me that you commented on my poem and posted this one in the same day.
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On Thursday, August 28, 2003, Liz
(265) wrote:
I'll take it as "...the sincerest form of flattery," but could you please change the title some to make it a bit more different from mine?
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A former member wrote:
Like the others, I like this one. Glad to have you here at DP.