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memories
By Kitt
i think... i used to love you
the old you,
that showed me the stars in your eyes and the sweetness of summer.
now it's different.
i come home to try to hold you and smell your scent on another in my head.
sometimes i can't look at you because it hurts too much.
sometimes things just die...
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Copyright 2004 Kitt
Published on Monday, November 22, 2004.
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On Saturday, November 19, 2005, Solitary Dreamer
(24)
wrote:
...situations like this make me sort of glad to be a loner...very well written.
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A former member wrote:
I liked this poem. I think everyone has felt this emotion at one point or another. Everyone has a person that they have trouble looking at.
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
wow, so short but so strong."the stars in your eyes and the sweetness of summer".. great write, very vulnerable and damn, really hurt. nicely done
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
i think...everyone can relate to this. beautifully stated. please post more soon!! Brian
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
Reading this was like pouring salt in a wound that just won't heal. I have these memories as well. This hurt. *favs*
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
it happens so quickly, and so painful, like the stab of a knife...and it hurts, it hurts like hell...
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A former member wrote:
this has a beautiful vulnerability . . at first i felt the flickerings of candlelight . . and in the last line they withered me like the burning of a rose. I can certainly relate . . wonderfully written.
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On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
this hit a part of me that is very vunerable right now...well done.
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A former member wrote:
well written...i just went thru this a couple a days ago...i was trying to write something but this seems to sum it up pretty good...great write...~Bullet~
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On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, Kitt
(17) wrote:
thank you.. i'm sorry to hear that had to happen to you. :\ hope things get better and you have a good holiday. -kitt
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On Monday, November 22, 2004, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
sad. but true
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