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Ode To Myself
By rondant
I need to find myself again
I feel like my walls are closing in
There's just so much pressure to take
If this is a dream, I wish to awake
Even thew people who never frown
eventually will break down
Life can be such a fight
It's getting harder to tell what is right
As i walk down this twisted road
With the weight of the world as my load
I don't know what i'm trying to prove
Because in the end we neither win nor lose
I need to shed this skin i'm in
And find my true self again
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Copyright 2004 rondant
Published on Wednesday, November 10, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Ode To Myself"
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A former member wrote:
This is so true. I find myself thinking this a lot. It flows very nicely, I like the rhythm. It speaks truth.
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A former member wrote:
This is excellent!
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371)
wrote:
wow .. this is very impressive - right now Im looking at this write, looking at the very blueprints, the very workings of the complex human condition, and how it's altering in its own prospective against it's circumstance: to find the solution, to figure
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
out how to survive. Very interesting. [D&A]
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
Now I remember why you are one of my favorite poets. This one sounds like me. I really liked it.
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A former member wrote:
so does this mean that you, Ronda, can come out to play? Or do you just get to stay home after work or school & hide in your room? :) ~Shane~
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, rondant
(58) wrote:
hummmm.... just depends on my mood. And if you're going to sing
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A former member wrote:
I love the part which says, "I need to shed this skin I'm in, & find my true self again."...
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
::claps:: well written
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