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black rain
By void
all the black rain falling
all the demons calling
nobody wants me to be alive
all of them want me to die
i dont have any real friends
i dont have a real family
all this black rain is falling
death is always calling
i dont want to be alive
all i want to do is die
my friends wont care
neither will my family
the black rain still is falling
but nobody is calling
i'm lying on the cold wet around
nobody will ever find me
i'm no longer on the run
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Copyright 2004 alex stefanski
Published on Sunday, November 7, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of a quote I read the other day,
"The clouds turn gloomy dark
But I have darker tears
My mouring rain
Pouring in pain
Dropped
Fallen
Stained"
By an unknown soul
I admire your honesty and the vulnerability you were able to pour into this piece of your soul put into words for all
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A former member wrote:
that seems to be my life in a nutshell that was really great and im glad that im not the only one
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A former member wrote:
This is a very real feeling of invisibleness, I can understand the way you felt when creating this masterpiece, Maddy x
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A former member wrote:
"nobody will ever find me i'm no longer on the run" ~ this is just awesome . . i am voiceless, void. Every line was simply divine. .dripping in raindrop glitterings . . freezing on my eyelashes. You have tugged at my heart . . exceptional. Rose
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On Monday, November 22, 2004, void
(35)
wrote:
thnk u much
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
AWESOME!! I loved it
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
HOLY F*ck! that's EXACTLY what i'm feeling right now. very good. very good poem. ^Autumn^
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On Sunday, November 7, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
Embrassed the emotion all of us feel from time to time. Very good.
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