Concrete Coffin (Sequel to 'Concrete Noose').

By Nesfurata

Concrete Coffin (Sequel to 'Concrete Noose').

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Copyright 2004 Nesfurata
Published on Thursday, November 4, 2004.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • Elise On Tuesday, June 28, 2005, Elise (188)By person wrote:

    Cool, this one is creative too. I like how you shaped things out and yet it didn't sway you from the perfect play on words.

  • A former member wrote: what a fall into the void...i think i like it here *laughs maniacally*...no, that was bleeping awesome. -zay

  • A former member wrote: What a trip into a nightmare more than a few of us have had. This is superbly creative, more so than most. -END-

  • A former member wrote: that is godamn awesome, take a bow.

  • JiNx On Friday, November 12, 2004, JiNx (98)By person wrote:

    wow that one was really good Nes! Great infact.... -JiNx(ie)

  • Zhee On Thursday, November 4, 2004, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    i really liked what you did here.. lending a concrete form to words.. wonderfully done, again! great job!

  • A former member wrote: I like the format of it especially, how it's shaped, I haven't seen Concrete Noose yet, but I'm about to go see. Nice job!

  • DarkWolf On Thursday, November 4, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Yeah.. Ive been waiting for this.. awesome.. I like the designs for this and Noose.. very creative.. sometime I may try one.. excellent work Elizabeth.. -Michael

  • BeautifulCalamity On Thursday, November 4, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    nicely done, very creative. liked the use of certain words to get through.i wonder if this comment made any sense, loved it either way

  • glasshouse On Thursday, November 4, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Intense and impressive. -Glass

  • A former member wrote: I'll mark this as a fave too. People ought to try more of these poems in weird shapes. What shape are you in? Well rounded? A square? Or just bad? :) ~Shane~

  • AHHH On Thursday, November 4, 2004, AHHH (187)By person wrote:

    AWESOME.

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