a question

By mysticventures


If

time

stood

still,

would

we

still

have

time

to

kill?

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    the thought anwers it self loudly in my head by saying "this moment last for ever!" .. damn this is deep & beautiful to think about.. a moment lasting for ever.. *669*

  • A former member wrote: HMMMM, well now you got me thinking. wow, I dunno the answer to this.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (117)By person wrote:

    An infinite amount......................

  • Munkey On Monday, August 23, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    Wow... thats quite the concept...I'll be thinking about this for the rest of the week now...hmmm...would we?... -Munkey-

  • purr_verse On Sunday, August 22, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    all the time in the world, over and over and over...or never, frozen... well, that's my guess... >;) nice write; thought-provoking minimalism beautifully done.

  • A former member wrote: This poem makes one want to kill oneself, but then once you think about it, you wouldn't be able to. :)

  • elisa On Sunday, August 22, 2004, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    what a paradox thought:) made me think! elisa

  • Nesfurata On Sunday, August 22, 2004, Nesfurata (58)By person wrote:

    That is a very good question. I like the format. It's simple yet it conveys a lot.

  • Soulseeker On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Yes, killers are too fucking creative now days!!! Bethany

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