my last day

By void

i feel like I'm dying now
i don't know why I'm crying now
the wilted rose falls on the floor
as my lover slams the door
i wish i new just how he feels
i wish he knew just how to heal
i have way too many scars
that have never gone away
i have lost my "shining star"
so this is my last living day

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Copyright 2004 alex stefanski
Published on Saturday, October 30, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Enigma On Friday, March 23, 2007, Enigma (90)By person wrote:

    Thats very sad, its short and good to..AwSOMe

  • A former member wrote: UMMM...QUESTION: WOULD THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH YOUR" JACK"?

  • A former member wrote: wow...very powerful...

  • Sex Slave On Saturday, October 30, 2004, Sex Slave (78)By person wrote:

    Sad And Good Very butiful

  • void On Saturday, October 30, 2004, void (35)By person wrote:

    thnx

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