It's All Around
By Liath
Here I am standing in the door
Quietly perceived
Now I'm screaming more
My hate has been reconceived
Don't you see me here
I am about to die
Can't you feel me near
Open your fucking eyes
Did you feel me slap you
Across the face?
Reach out infront of you and feel around
But nobody's there
It's all around
Can't you remember me?
I'm the one who set you free
Everything I did for thee
Turned around and murdered me
Did you hear me scream your name?
Hold out your hands and pray for the light
Its' about time I set things right
Raise your chin and embrace the pain
So hold me while I bite
Let it go into me
It's useless to try to fight
I finish you with a child's glee
As you're thrown to the ground
Your pain will set me free
My motives I hope you've found
This is what you get for saying you're over me
Comments on "It's All Around"
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A former member wrote:
this was a great ride-very good. and the waay it came together was priceless.
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A former member wrote:
this is so beautiful...the poem as well as the thoughts...
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A former member wrote:
This emotion is astounding. It seems so powerful yet so tender - "This is what you get for saying you're over me" - I'm off to dislodge my heart from my throat.. ~*~ Rose ~*~
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On Friday, October 15, 2004, Liath
(35) wrote:
Woah haven't heard from you in months and months!
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A former member wrote:
I love the last line; the motive behind the piece.. Brings it all together perfectly. Great write. ~Wish Upon A Star