Ultra-Violent
By MGood
Imagine a gentle breeze,
That carries a rotting stench.
Animals adapting to please,
Pacing an unholy trench.
Envision a rage,
A jealous fit.
An innocent stage.
A common fuse lit.
Beings of pure beauty,
Painted with doubt.
Misjudging duty.
Devout.
Faithfully referring our hate,
With a wink and an honest smile.
A short kindness shown too late,
Leaving question to compile.
Creating a power.
A supernatural vent.
Our longings devour.
Emotions invent.
Soothing a passion dismissed.
Wrapped in familiar regret.
A heartfelt twist.
An Attempt to forget.
Relaxed in delay,
Surrounded,
By the threat of dismay,
We have founded.
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Published on Friday, November 30, 2001.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
very interesting, and it does indeed get the reader thinking. Good Write ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
sublimely thought provoking and kind of entrancing. awesome work.
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
amazing visions were implanted in my mind......i enjoyed this immensely....*goes to read more*...****-chris
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Ill read this one again. I like the way you write. I could decribe why, but it seem kind of pointless. The way I like it is obvius and clear in every way I think of it. Tiger
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A former member wrote:
this is beautifully savage. i dig this one! way to be!
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
every line so masterful creates more and more images till you get to the end with such a vision of awe its awesome poetry