the quest

By mysticventures


By losing one's self

To the quest

To the faith


On relinquishes desire

For understanding

For grace


Thus frees the heart

For heaven to hold

The glory of god


The treasures untold

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: umm sorry but god has no glory

  • sixsixnine On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    i agree with all the poets comments here.. you never fall short extramly talented.. *669*

  • A former member wrote: Kick ass, favorite verse is the first.

  • ONEANDLONELY On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, ONEANDLONELY (114)By person wrote:

    Oh yea. Give it all away. Thus the gift may be recieved.

  • A former member wrote: Keep the faith, my man!

  • TheLastDragon On Sunday, August 22, 2004, TheLastDragon (69)By person wrote:

    Simple, powerful, and unadorned. Excellent!

  • Northstar On Sunday, August 22, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    so much of your work is simply stated elegance and meaning--very nicely done

  • Soulseeker On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Soulseeker (108)By person wrote:

    Very powerful concept here! Nice write! Like the line refering to grace! we sometimes forget the importance of that! Bethany

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