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Release me
By mysticventures
Release me O thine passion
Unbound your arms from around my soul
For I have been your slave too long
And grow weary of wearing your chains
Release me O thine passion
And let me breath again, anew
A life without restraints or holds
A freedom I am overdue
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, July 29, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Release me"
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On Saturday, July 31, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240)
wrote:
I think many of us have went through the lull you are talking about here (assuming I KNOW what you're talking about). Well put, nonetheless.
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
extreamly powerful work ..again.. you display true emotions of what lies at the core... hardcore shit! i to have felt this way... *669*
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Escape from passion, from desire itself - in all its meanings - has been sought by many people for many years... it's the center of Buddhism, as well as the single paradox within it... good luck!
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
.. not a demand, no attempt at breaking free by one's own power but a plea, an askance. Subtle and compelling. Very nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
Shot yet powerful. An epic heroic tragedy confined into a small space.
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