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Dedication to a Spider
By mysticventures
Tearing down the pumphouse walls
I disturbed a spiders nest
I watched as the mother struggled in vain
To save her sack of eggs
- And felt the anguish of her soul
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Thursday, July 22, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "Dedication to a Spider"
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A former member wrote:
Short, yet quite successful in creating an alternative viewpoint.
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
Such a simple thing.. seen from a different view. Amazing, touching. -Michael
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On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Simple, touching, elegant. ~ wen
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On Sunday, August 1, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
ow. as Northstar said, delicate indeed, but with such internal sting; emotion captured so succinctly and evocatively. wonderful write.
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
MV--every work of yours I read makes me adore you even more--this piece is so simple and beauitful--you capture nature, delicate and artistic, in its simplicity--very nicely done
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
this is strong,thats all i can say,it ignited a thought within that i couldnt define,,,theres something to be found in this work
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