And the Song Remains the Same

By mysticventures





Driving passion -
restrained

Loins on fire -
untamed

Sleepless longing -
unclaimed

Lustful fantasies -
refrained

Endless torture -
maintained

Temporary relief -
attained

Sanity barely -
sustained

Desire subdued -
remained



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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, July 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    wow this rocks! sorry your so frustrated though :) ~kristy

  • mysticventures On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    hey, just an attempt to write about a guys frustration you know?

  • A former member wrote: Hmmm, speechless. But I do like it.

  • mysticventures On Saturday, August 14, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    glad to see someone realizes what this is actually all about (guess it's a guy thing)

  • Midnight Phoenix On Saturday, July 31, 2004, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    I liked the structure you used here. It helped give your words a different feel.

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    damn i love the way you write each verse touching my insides *669* never stop..

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    reminds me of a dvd I got .. same title never the less.

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    .. strong in it's simplicity. I especially like the structure of this. Very nicely done.

  • A former member wrote: brief and beautiful. i liked this.

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