And the Song Remains the Same
By mysticventures
Driving passion -
restrained
Loins on fire -
untamed
Sleepless longing -
unclaimed
Lustful fantasies -
refrained
Endless torture -
maintained
Temporary relief -
attained
Sanity barely -
sustained
Desire subdued -
remained
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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Wednesday, July 14, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "And the Song Remains the Same"
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
wow this rocks! sorry your so frustrated though :) ~kristy
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
hey, just an attempt to write about a guys frustration you know?
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A former member wrote:
Hmmm, speechless. But I do like it.
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On Saturday, August 14, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
glad to see someone realizes what this is actually all about (guess it's a guy thing)
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On Saturday, July 31, 2004, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
I liked the structure you used here. It helped give your words a different feel.
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On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
damn i love the way you write each verse touching my insides *669* never stop..
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
reminds me of a dvd I got .. same title never the less.
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On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
.. strong in it's simplicity. I especially like the structure of this. Very nicely done.
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A former member wrote:
brief and beautiful. i liked this.