truth revealed

By sixsixnine

it's clear for me to see
you're back stabbing me
it's no surprise
just the way it was meant to be

no jesus
no forgiveness
no how to be free

it's clear you think
i speak insanity

it's my fault
i opened the vault
of travasty
&
negativity
&
clearly
i can't fucking see
&
i'm feeling so lazy
&
escaping into some wicked fucking fantacy
&
you're acting so friendly
apperantly
here for me
but your
slavery to scrutany
draining this empty
reality
out of me

orbituary
of peyote

asylum for
the free
unlike me

i'm out of order
no where near sober
fucking getting older
still up to your shoulder
i seem to only inspire disorder
this whole fucking life shit is a blur
my poetry more erraticly letting me see
melting
falling
calling
nothing

this is nothing new
partly true
mostly darkass blue
fucking you
thru & thru
****669****

it's ok
i'll fuck you anyway______

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Published on Wednesday, May 19, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "truth revealed"

A former member wrote: i like this so much I thought I would read it and comment again... i love this one, sounds like its coming out of the head of a crazy person, hehe, nice one ~serpentine~
A former member wrote: lmmfao, Wow. Damn mother fucker, You have some great poetry
On Saturday, May 22, 2004, sixsixnine (477) wrote:

i lost track of the actual date that i created this piece but it's more like the continuation of the first poem i posted here *invisible doom* i just want to thank all of you for your flattering comments i really appreciate them all * take care everybody
On Thursday, May 20, 2004, aXe FactoR (335) wrote:

sorry if i was too emotional. but im really feeling fucked-up. anyways, could see ya poetry skill rising to greater heights. wanna do an anger filled collabo with you sometime. perhaps u could drop me a dpmail if ya interested. stay cool. *hugs*
On Thursday, May 20, 2004, aXe FactoR (335) wrote:

i was crying before i read this. a close friend of mine just hurt me. so this poem was very heartfelt. i could feel the anger in this. i could feel anger rising up in me as i read this. arghhhh...just fuck the whole world!
On Thursday, May 20, 2004, Mute Serenade (445) wrote:

a downward spiral of insatiable thought... rockin man, seriously awesome. appropriate title as well, it's like the inner workings of everyday fuckupitude... damn good six... Sue
A former member wrote: ummmmmmmmmm good job
A former member wrote: the style of your poetry seems to change everytime I read something new from you, once again, great work ~serpentine~
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Anth (1133) wrote:

great work man, my very fave of yours
A former member wrote: alskfieriisdfkeislfjeiks'fjaeiuraidsfka
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (156) wrote:

Hehe, Thats Cool, Even By GreekPhilosopher Standards. GPhD.
On Wednesday, May 19, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67) wrote:

You never stop amazing me with your poems...*grins* Gosh...can't wait to write that story with ya! ~Tracy

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