me & you

By sixsixnine

hold on
fuck it
let go
don't you even know
what's in your soul
you only know
my dick is up your hole
it's sodomy & out of control

baby kiss me
while i fuck you
lick & suck me
cuz i love you
let's play rape me
& i'll tie you
blow me crazy
as i eat you

no more lame
fucking games
just soothing fucking pain
no more blame
or stupid shame
nothing the same simply difrent
me & you
**669**
3/28/2003

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Published on Wednesday, May 12, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "me & you"

On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mylissa (825) wrote:

Raw, I love it.
On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, Beautiful Scars (175) wrote:

damn.. this IS twisted.. i like it..
On Sunday, June 26, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69) wrote:

twisted and hot and real! I like it!!---Steph
On Monday, May 16, 2005, peril_notion (87) wrote:

Damn... you said it. I'll just leave it at that. Nicely done. ~Heather
On Wednesday, August 18, 2004, AHHH (184) wrote:

damn... you're twisted...I like...
A former member wrote: hmm... interesting...
On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

hmmm, i liked it, strong,but oh so real.......urban
On Sunday, May 30, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

cry baby cry LOL! glad yall liked it *669*
On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

haha...and i swear to come out with something sicker than this...!!! and really would like to thank you for your support on my works to. hugs**
On Friday, May 14, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

very grossly sadistically cool... lol...i like... hahaha... who cares about it being over-direct rite? :)
A former member wrote: Haha...you are great...really direct, as Tracer said...you sound like you have a few bitches...**June**
On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Tracer (99) wrote:

That was rather direct, although not my kind of poem, as with anth, I guess for its type, nice write. Guess this was very straight-forward, sometimes that is needed...^vTracerv^
On Wednesday, May 12, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

yeah not my kinda poem but i respect the immediateness that comes across in a way, and the flow was especially good
A former member wrote: nicly written but kinda disgusting. but its still a nice piece of writing.