Gray

By XCryingMinotaurX

Gray

There is something about a day like this.
A day where my eyes match the sky.

I am not sure I care that he may even care less.
A sentence that trailed off and died before it could break my heart.
These ears are keen and I knew what those words meant.
Ignorance as stone statues danced in puddles and tires swam across oceans.

It was a miserable day.
We both knew time had taken it's toll.
Pitter patter on the windows of his black Maxima.
Unforunate that I still wanted him in every way.

There is something about a day like this.
A day where my eyes match the sky.

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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Thursday, April 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • flying_fox On Thursday, March 16, 2006, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    this is lovely in its sadness... this is how to make heartbreak pretty.

  • MyScarsStillBleed On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed (16)By person wrote:

    Wow, those are some beautiful eyes. The description and emotion of the poem are really amazing too. I know how you feel, I have mood eyes that change with my emotions

  • Munkey On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Munkey (79)By person wrote:

    My Dear I think those are a pair of the most lovely eyes that mine have seen in a long time ... beautiful. -Munkey-

  • Savannah On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    you are sooo talented - keep it up and welcome to my fave list!!

  • so_skeevy On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, so_skeevy (64)By person wrote:

    beautiful. just...wow

  • KittyStryker On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    ::hug:: my jennifred- you should listen to Patsy Cline. i know, it sounds crazy, but seriously? i bet you'd love her. she feels us. feels us GOOD.

  • murder_in_clubland On Monday, April 19, 2004, murder_in_clubland (384)By person wrote:

    wow are those conatcts =) ~ss

  • XCryingMinotaurX On Monday, April 19, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX (20)By person wrote:

    nope, those are all mine. the pic in my profile is when i had contacts.

  • Exodus On Sunday, April 18, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    this is extremely lovely.....beautiful work....jsut amazing...

  • OLd SouL On Saturday, April 17, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    now those eyes are intimidating to me. stunning.

  • knightmirror On Friday, April 16, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    wow.very beautiful indeed.i agree with fox in every way.-chris

  • flying_fox On Friday, April 16, 2004, flying_fox (571)By person wrote:

    my god... your eyes are simply gorgeous, and your poem brought tears to mine.

  • A former member wrote: beautiful poem and eyes ~serpentine~

  • manywalks On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    Beautiful, both. ~ mw

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