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Gray
By XCryingMinotaurX
There is something about a day like this.
A day where my eyes match the sky.
I am not sure I care that he may even care less.
A sentence that trailed off and died before it could break my heart.
These ears are keen and I knew what those words meant.
Ignorance as stone statues danced in puddles and tires swam across oceans.
It was a miserable day.
We both knew time had taken it's toll.
Pitter patter on the windows of his black Maxima.
Unforunate that I still wanted him in every way.
There is something about a day like this.
A day where my eyes match the sky.
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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Thursday, April 15, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Thursday, March 16, 2006, flying_fox
(573)
wrote:
this is lovely in its sadness... this is how to make heartbreak pretty.
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On Wednesday, January 5, 2005, MyScarsStillBleed
(16) wrote:
Wow, those are some beautiful eyes. The description and emotion of the poem are really amazing too. I know how you feel, I have mood eyes that change with my emotions
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Munkey
(79) wrote:
My Dear I think those are a pair of the most lovely eyes that mine have seen in a long time ... beautiful. -Munkey-
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On Tuesday, August 31, 2004, Savannah
(218) wrote:
you are sooo talented - keep it up and welcome to my fave list!!
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
beautiful. just...wow
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On Tuesday, April 20, 2004, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
::hug:: my jennifred- you should listen to Patsy Cline. i know, it sounds crazy, but seriously? i bet you'd love her. she feels us. feels us GOOD.
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(388) wrote:
wow are those conatcts =) ~ss
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On Monday, April 19, 2004, XCryingMinotaurX
(20) wrote:
nope, those are all mine. the pic in my profile is when i had contacts.
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On Sunday, April 18, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
this is extremely lovely.....beautiful work....jsut amazing...
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, OLd SouL
(732) wrote:
now those eyes are intimidating to me. stunning.
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
wow.very beautiful indeed.i agree with fox in every way.-chris
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
my god... your eyes are simply gorgeous, and your poem brought tears to mine.
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A former member wrote:
beautiful poem and eyes ~serpentine~
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Beautiful, both. ~ mw
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