In and Out of the Green Room

By XCryingMinotaurX

Mood
dark red and glitter strewn across the floor.
Faces
judging what they see but not knowing a soul.
Eyes
deepest brown to be seen and realization stops breathing:

"I'm prone to find dark eyes in deep dark places". *


Words
thrown inbetween laughter and quick drunken glances.
Figured
another body better than this so assuming to be ignored.
Night
pills taken with whiskey followed by a herbal remedy.

"I don't usually do this, but you seemed to be the coolest girl in the place."


Dawn
so much learned and tasting insides is not far off.
Numbers
exchanged and gladly given not sure of this outcome.
Drive
back to the highway and the sun welcomes new possibilites.
Good-bye
matters not when this evening was beautiful.



* see ...Nihilty...

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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Saturday, April 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Northstar On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    this was very well written--I really dig your style here--

  • knightmirror On Sunday, April 11, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    wow.*i'm prone to find dark eyes in deep dark places*another superb write from you as always my dear Jen.keep up the fantastic work.much love-chris

  • K_Love On Saturday, April 10, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Your good at making me see images, great write. ~Kirsten~

  • Mistress Morbid On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    Hove those words thrown in there randomly helps the picture become a little more vivid. I really likrd the way you opened it too. Setting the the 'mood'. Great work. -Morb

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