In and Out of the Green Room
By XCryingMinotaurX
Mood
dark red and glitter strewn across the floor.
Faces
judging what they see but not knowing a soul.
Eyes
deepest brown to be seen and realization stops breathing:
"I'm prone to find dark eyes in deep dark places". *
Words
thrown inbetween laughter and quick drunken glances.
Figured
another body better than this so assuming to be ignored.
Night
pills taken with whiskey followed by a herbal remedy.
"I don't usually do this, but you seemed to be the coolest girl in the
place."
Dawn
so much learned and tasting insides is not far off.
Numbers
exchanged and gladly given not sure of this outcome.
Drive
back to the highway and the sun welcomes new possibilites.
Good-bye
matters not when this evening was beautiful.
* see ...Nihilty...
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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Saturday, April 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "In and Out of the Green Room"
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
this was very well written--I really dig your style here--
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
wow.*i'm prone to find dark eyes in deep dark places*another superb write from you as always my dear Jen.keep up the fantastic work.much love-chris
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Your good at making me see images, great write. ~Kirsten~
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Hove those words thrown in there randomly helps the picture become a little more vivid. I really likrd the way you opened it too. Setting the the 'mood'. Great work. -Morb