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... XoXoXo ...
By XCryingMinotaurX
Alone, I
Walking under street lights trying to find my dying aura
looking past bronzed ducklings and crack-pipe torched lighters
tears streaking the night sky looking for falling stars
"I can relate, 5 sided and uneven in every way" I cried cried cried.
Empty, I
Searching the city skyline for a new reflection to pray to
loosing a soul to gain an enemy marked scar by scar
steamboats in hot showers fogging up reality and blurring truth
whatever makes you sleep better at night while I bleed bleed bleed.
Decaying, I
Tripping upon shattered cliffs and crashing tidal waves avoiding touch
can see my demise upon rocks down below but eyes cannot look away
ghosts whisper "girl, can you still feel what you hold dear?"
body trembling with hurt and betrayal so i shall jump jump jump.
Fading, I
Memories tempting to bring back life but sad at long last
music still flooding the brain and ringing ever true through stubborn ears
eyes looking their last upon dreams of past lovers and true love lost
to breathe one final free breath is to live live live.
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Copyright 2004 XCryingMinotaurX
Published on Friday, April 2, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on " ... XoXoXo ..."
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A former member wrote:
glad im tripping backwards. .. this was sucha clever format, aesthetically tasteful and intriguing..with a haze of surreality clinging to its fine bone structure. . .
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On Monday, May 23, 2005, Munkey
(79)
wrote:
I love it. It's like reading the chapters of your reality. "Walking under street lights trying to find my dying aura," alomost makes you want to cry. -Munkey-
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
Wow....this was powerful...I love the form of it too. Wonderful. -Morb
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
this is fantastic. wonderful imagery and i love the format, and the line "I can relate, 5 sided and uneven in every way" is outstanding. great stuff. :)
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
fuck.had to read agin.*steamboats in hot showers fogging up reality and blurring truth*you are amazing you know this don't you.oh yeah i forgot to give you something.*two thumbs up only for lacking four*as my brother would say.again much love,chris
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
holy shit this was fucking phenomenal.i truly loved the first line*walking under street lights trying to find my dying aura*and the ending was brilliant too.what am i saying,the whole thing is brillant.****much love chris
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