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Sonata de Lacrimas
By Spiritus_Frumenti
All I feel,
...nerve endings of detachment
Cold departures into obscurity
An unknown, far too real
Too much for this fragile world to hold
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Tell me, my friend,
Of those sun rays beating against my eyes
Does it know about life?
Does it know about fate?
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Tell me, my friend,
Of those winged birds in the sky
Do they know about love?
Do they know about hate?
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Tell me, my dearest friend,
Of those illuminating spots in the night
Does it ever wonder why it’s so dark?
Does it ever dream to escape....?
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Copyright © Juan Antonìo Thomas, 2004
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Copyright 2004 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Saturday, March 20, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Sonata de Lacrimas"
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On Monday, April 23, 2007, torn_beauty
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wrote:
beautiful write doll. very easy to get sucked into.
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On Saturday, November 27, 2004, Litteratus
(42) wrote:
Darkly hypnotic from start to finish, yet straightforward and simple for a poem of such power.
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On Saturday, April 3, 2004, manywalks
(750) wrote:
I may be slow, but I eventually do get around to reading, very glad I didn't let this one slip by unnoticed. Thanks. ~ mw
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On Friday, March 26, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Great piece - the last stanza is a beautiful way to end this piece. Ciao, T/S
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On Wednesday, March 24, 2004, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Very thoughtful and mind-drifting .. I pondered on those lines over and over ..some calming peace overwhelmed me.
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On Sunday, March 21, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
Excellent....meaningful and well written...
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On Saturday, March 20, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Beautifully rendered, stunningly played out. Truly a sonata for the opressed and those suffering the tedius nightmare of day by day take what may...
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