Manipulation [Feel it]
By hate_doll
Opportunist:
One who takes advantage of any opportunity to achieve an end, often with
no regard for principles or consequences.
You.
Manipulate fear
As a tool
For your progression
...
Or rather,
Retrogression
All lies
Selfish, stupid lies
But we are blinded
By the sandstorms
Of fake war
And propaganda
You.
Immobilize people
With invisible fear
Crucify your dreams
With the sins
Of your people
You.
Hold peace above heads
The forbidden fruit
A sin to indulge on
But always tempted
As you worship
A cannibal Jesus
I will never follow you
Up that slippery slope
In which we are destined
To slip and fall,
A flesh blood red carpet
To make it easier
For you to climb the hill
I will never trust in a God or a country I am told to fear.
...whytt*04
Comments on "Manipulation [Feel it]"
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A former member wrote:
Damn! I've been reading alot of your poems..and I really like them all.. ha ha.. :)
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I'm in an obtuse mood so forgive me for the inane comment of "Great Work" Truly I loved this...
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
It scares me. What a staggering poem.
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A former member wrote:
Damn near perfect piece here, Whytt..missed your stuff, glad you're writing again...
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On Friday, February 20, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
this is such an excellent piece, I think i must read the rest of your work, you are very talented, good job : ) ~Emptyness~
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On Thursday, February 19, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
i have often thought the "fear your god of love" concept a strange one... This is a powerful piece, as FF said. purr
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On Thursday, February 19, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
this is great work.. love the last line in particular. Powerfully assertive. FF
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On Thursday, February 19, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
niiiiiiiiice-]darkness[-
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A former member wrote:
There is such authority in your words... In the best way possible, such powerful writing. "I will never trust in a God or a country I am told to fear." ... So clever, too. Wow. ~Wish Upon A Star