pink elephant

painted
an image
on my eye lids
so i see
when i
close my
eyes
an amazing
masterpiece

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Published on Tuesday, January 13, 2004. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Comments on "pink elephant"

On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Jonas said it, so did Carl. I to love this piece
On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

wow I see I allready commented on this. Still. I love it
On Wednesday, August 22, 2007, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Short, sharp and loaded with different interpretations. Gorgeous. -Carl
On Monday, February 2, 2004, Jonas (715) wrote:

beautiful! implications extending into so many beautiful possiblities with so few words!! lovely, absolutely lovely. some substances can open doors to interesting insights.
A former member wrote: hey... i like this its deep ~LEAH
On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

this gave alot of thought.. I wonder if you wrote this about not seeing beauty in dearkness and youre dreams.. wonderful write. made me think for sure. :o) Monkey
On Tuesday, January 27, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

seriusly if you were on acid.. the no wonder the tittle is pink elephant and the story/stile was like a dreamstate.. hehe.. I like it lots.. :o) Monkey
A former member wrote: 'an amazing masterpiece', like an abstract painting, this composed poem; i can feel the paints dripping from the brush behind your subconcious eyes...