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Robin.
By Exodus
White noise and pineapple
Sawing down your brain
Ripples and spirals
Entertain your eyes
Crazed
Obsessed
The numbers run side ways
Upside down the walls
Trapped in cyber space
No one to hear
Voice box locked up tight
In the atmosphere
Attack of the giant guilt
Strangles you out way before
She had a chance to apologize
For her tendency to ignore
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Saturday, January 3, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, stormtalk
(729)
wrote:
"white noise and pineapple" - way to suck me in from the first line ;) good stuff!
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On Wednesday, January 7, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
bloody lovely visuals... I think I know perhaps why the need for an exodus... "exodus, movement of jah people..." i love that song! 1LOVE, many diverse expressions! Keep doing your thing!
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On Sunday, January 4, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
the giant guilt - that's a scary monster ..... cool piece - funguy
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
Tara..lol....
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A former member wrote:
Cool, what is your friends name?
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
oooo lovely .. its different in an insane-ish way
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A former member wrote:
Wow, you will never believe how much that i can relate to this poem, i have a mom named Robin, and you jsut described her, Thankou for writing such a great poem.
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On Saturday, January 3, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
Thats funny...I wrote this for my friend...her moms name is Robin...i'm so happy you could relate to it...
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