Mine

By totaltrip

We agreed to leave it out
I felt protected
I carried my heart in my pocket
Where not even you could pick it
But you did
I let you have it
You gave me yours
And now
Now I realize that I gave you nothing
I have been taking trips on you
Nothing more, nothing less
And my heart, my heart is still safe in my pocket
Safe where no one can pick it not even you

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Copyright 2006 totaltrip
Published on Tuesday, December 18, 2001.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • thelostmessenger On Thursday, May 10, 2007, thelostmessenger (110)By person wrote:

    easy to relate to, and so simple but to the point. very nice write.

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Wow... this told me things that I myself have been feeling. Amazing write. I myself could never express this the way that you did. Good job. ~*~Tart~*~

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