In Deaths Dream Kingdom
By WinterGrave
Eyes dare not meet..-in dream,
in deaths dream kingdom,
there is eyes..-dare not meet,
in dream,
forever in exile,
walking the valley,
for whatever they should,
but look away,
in deaths dream kingdom....
Theirs nothing to see,
eyes see,
for whatever reason,
they dont look at me,
do not look at the eyes
in deaths dream kingdom
nothing is as it seems,
a broken heart, lost souls,
a cavern leading away....
This isĀ not the "is"
this is the "what could be"
residing water
a season waiting,
a sickness of being,
this is not...only if you want,
this is deaths dream,
and nothing is as it seems....
there is nothing to see,
beware of the eyes,
they do not see,
no being,
just a dream,
in deaths dream kingdom
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Copyright 2003 WinterGrave
Published on Thursday, November 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "In Deaths Dream Kingdom"
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
oh this piece is amazing...a dreamy landscape painted with words...i really do love the title and the repetition of that line...-l-
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On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Very dreamy and fantasy like. An intriguing piece. Awesome work. ~L
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
very interesting pacing ,, was a cool read ... funguy
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i love the surrealist feel and flow of this piece - seems right in keeping with the dream concept, and i found this a pleasure to immerse in. :) purr
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On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Bloody_Hands
(20) wrote:
Slightly out of the ordinary, but thats the best way to go! Good work. ~Lynne
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On Sunday, November 16, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
This piece seems somewhat scattered, but I like it that way. I really like the title and theme as well.
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
i have no clue why i smiling.. oh, yes i do. i REALLY like this. amazing winter. ~Drea~