In Deaths Dream Kingdom

By WinterGrave

Eyes dare not meet..-in dream,
in deaths dream kingdom,
there is eyes..-dare not meet,
in dream,
forever in exile,
walking the valley,
for whatever they should,
but look away,
in deaths dream kingdom....

Theirs nothing to see,
eyes see,
for whatever reason,
they dont look at me,
do not look at the eyes
in deaths dream kingdom
nothing is as it seems,
a broken heart, lost souls,
a cavern leading away....

This isĀ  not the "is"
this is the "what could be"
residing water
a season waiting,
a sickness of being,
this is not...only if you want,
this is deaths dream,
and nothing is as it seems....

there is nothing to see,
beware of the eyes,
they do not see,
no being,
just a dream,
in deaths dream kingdom

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Copyright 2003 WinterGrave
Published on Thursday, November 13, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Friday, March 5, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    oh this piece is amazing...a dreamy landscape painted with words...i really do love the title and the repetition of that line...-l-

  • Lynaes On Thursday, March 4, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    Very dreamy and fantasy like. An intriguing piece. Awesome work. ~L

  • capt_funguy On Friday, February 13, 2004, capt_funguy (778)By person wrote:

    very interesting pacing ,, was a cool read ... funguy

  • purr_verse On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    i love the surrealist feel and flow of this piece - seems right in keeping with the dream concept, and i found this a pleasure to immerse in. :) purr

  • Bloody_Hands On Wednesday, November 26, 2003, Bloody_Hands (20)By person wrote:

    Slightly out of the ordinary, but thats the best way to go! Good work. ~Lynne

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, November 16, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    This piece seems somewhat scattered, but I like it that way. I really like the title and theme as well.

  • Drea On Thursday, November 13, 2003, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    i have no clue why i smiling.. oh, yes i do. i REALLY like this. amazing winter. ~Drea~

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