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To Daddy
By Cinn
To kill you would be pleasure,
But just to have you gone...
That's all I really want;
You don't understand anything,
And frankly I don't want you to,
I just want you to leave,
Forever;
I don't want to talk to you,
But I really have no choice,
You are always there,
I can't seam to shake you,
But this you will never understand,
Unless you figure it out;
But let's face it,
If you were to figue it out,
You would have long ago;
You'll just wonder why I never talk,
Why I never come up for Christmas,
Why I never ask fo you when I call,
And you'll never know,
Because I really do,
Hate you that much.
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Copyright 2003 Cinn
Published on Thursday, October 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "To Daddy"
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A former member wrote:
this is a really GOOD write. and the way you wrote it, it was like you were writing from MY veiwpoint, except i want my mom gone.. no, not gone. DEAD. very well written! -silenced
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A former member wrote:
This is one of the best poems I have ever read. I thank you for writing it and being able to express what other people feel.
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On Friday, October 24, 2003, IceDragoness
(195)
wrote:
I used to feel similarly once, im glad i don't anymore, the excess drama is the last thing i need, but i can appreciate this a lot just keep on venting those feelings ~Dawn
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On Friday, October 24, 2003, Griffin
(114) wrote:
nice, thats all i have to say...
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On Thursday, October 23, 2003, SilentStalker
(1066) wrote:
...I can understand that...sometimes it's just easier to display the rage rather than the reason...anything to get it out...well written; it saddens me to have you feel this way, but some things we cannot interfere in... -Darun
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A former member wrote:
Love the opening line.... I can relate to this alot, though its not my Father who I wish were gone.....
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A former member wrote:
But why? I mean I got the rage thing. Good solid rage in this poem...but no real deifinion or reason for the rage. Then again...if it's too personal then I can understand that too.
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On Thursday, October 23, 2003, Cinn
(152) wrote:
if i were to put the definition the why it would take more than 2 days to read - anything you could possibly think of is probably the reason.
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A former member wrote:
Ahh...I can understand that. I feel that way about some relationships I've been in. It would take days to describe every thing wrong that they did to me. And I don't feel they're even worth the energy...
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A former member wrote:
Like I said though...you have some good solid rage in this. Well written.
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On Friday, October 24, 2003, Silent_Raven
(19) wrote:
i think i can say there are times when i would love to give this kind of voice to my daddy issues...it's a really good write, thank you for sharing this with us *RAVEN.*
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