To Daddy

By Cinn

To kill you would be pleasure,
But just to have you gone...
That's all I really want;

You don't understand anything,
And frankly I don't want you to,
I just want you to leave,
Forever;

I don't want to talk to you,
But I really have no choice,
You are always there,
I can't seam to shake you,
But this you will never understand,
Unless you figure it out;

But let's face it,
If you were to figue it out,
You would have long ago;

You'll just wonder why I never talk,
Why I never come up for Christmas,
Why I never ask fo you when I call,
And you'll never know,
Because I really do,
Hate you that much.

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Published on Thursday, October 23, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "To Daddy"

A former member wrote: this is a really GOOD write. and the way you wrote it, it was like you were writing from MY veiwpoint, except i want my mom gone.. no, not gone. DEAD. very well written! -silenced
A former member wrote: This is one of the best poems I have ever read. I thank you for writing it and being able to express what other people feel.
On Friday, October 24, 2003, IceDragoness (193) wrote:

I used to feel similarly once, im glad i don't anymore, the excess drama is the last thing i need, but i can appreciate this a lot just keep on venting those feelings ~Dawn
On Friday, October 24, 2003, Griffin (114) wrote:

nice, thats all i have to say...
On Thursday, October 23, 2003, SilentStalker (1047) wrote:

...I can understand that...sometimes it's just easier to display the rage rather than the reason...anything to get it out...well written; it saddens me to have you feel this way, but some things we cannot interfere in... -Darun
A former member wrote: Love the opening line.... I can relate to this alot, though its not my Father who I wish were gone.....
A former member wrote: But why? I mean I got the rage thing. Good solid rage in this poem...but no real deifinion or reason for the rage. Then again...if it's too personal then I can understand that too.
On Thursday, October 23, 2003, Cinn (152) wrote:

if i were to put the definition the why it would take more than 2 days to read - anything you could possibly think of is probably the reason.
A former member wrote: Ahh...I can understand that. I feel that way about some relationships I've been in. It would take days to describe every thing wrong that they did to me. And I don't feel they're even worth the energy...
A former member wrote: Like I said though...you have some good solid rage in this. Well written.
On Friday, October 24, 2003, Silent_Raven (19) wrote:

i think i can say there are times when i would love to give this kind of voice to my daddy issues...it's a really good write, thank you for sharing this with us *RAVEN.*