Silent

By WinterGrave

Silent
whispered souls,
silent screams,
pain filled dreams,
silent, as it all seams.
....
silence,
in my mind
silence,
my soul trys to unwind
but the sands of life
have melted to my skin.
....
silent now,
all is quit,
it seems to me
this is just another
fucked up dream.

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Copyright 2003 WinterGrave
Published on Wednesday, October 15, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Thursday, January 14, 2010, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    Silence can be the loudest of all things. It's when silence dominates that we are left in the ring with our demons. Can be a very lonely place but also a place for growth.

  • A former member wrote: i relate to this work. i too feel the silence. it block out any other sound, oddly. then there's voices... the damn voices...

  • Beautiful Scars On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Beautiful Scars (175)By person wrote:

    You have A way with owrds is all i can say..-fairy-

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    once again you are great at portraying emotions...very well done...-l-

  • Midnight Phoenix On Sunday, November 9, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    I feel as though I can relate to this one. Nice write!

  • Chameleon On Friday, October 17, 2003, Chameleon (111)By person wrote:

    I love that last line...ties it all together...good job.

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    silence for me is torture and this was indeed a good expression of that pain

  • A former member wrote: good really good. Drake

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