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elder in infancy
By pessum ire animus
release me let me see
fight myself in my misery
hold me tight
let me be
redundancy helps me in my contradictory
not young
still in infancy
the world my tragedy
conspiring against my
conspiracy
why always this blasphemy
why always this
blasphemy
wake up and see your dreams
fall asleep find your
reality
perferation infiltrates my veins
all ive caused
in us is pain
hate or love no longer substained
take these
pills nothing left to gain
not young still in infancy
the
world my tragedy
conspiring against my conspiracy
why
always this blasphemy
why always this blasphemy
wake up and
see your dreams
fall asleep find your reality
release
me let me see
fight myself in my misery
hold me tight let
me be
redundancy helps me in my contradictory
seperation
of body and mind
segregation of man and divine
partitions
of hate and sublime...
seperation of body and mind
segregation
of man and divine
partitions of hate and sublime...
rampantly
calm, peacefully fighting...
not wanting... not knowing... not dreaming...
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Copyright 2003 das schwarze stieg
Published on Friday, October 10, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
enchanting. divine in all sense and to all senses. i love.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246)
wrote:
wonderfull.. could be a great song.. nothing much to say. just good job :O)
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A former member wrote:
This write... is perfect. I can't say any more about it.
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On Saturday, November 1, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
this poem is beautiful in its articulation......there are wise connections within your prose......well done well said.........urban
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On Thursday, October 16, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
good work...love the title
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On Monday, October 13, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
VERY GOOD! ME LIKE!
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On Saturday, October 11, 2003, Sky Singer
(153) wrote:
my dear, you've created yet another masterpiece. ::hug:: as always, your rhyme is excellent; at times the meter is a little off, but it still flows beautilfully ^_^ ti amo.
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On Friday, October 10, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
ooo i love it.. i like the lines wake up and see your dreams, fall asleep find your reality the best.. and the ending too, that whole last section is awsome
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