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Am I good enough for anyone??
By Rebel_Angel
Do you see what you do to me?
More then likely not.
I let down my shield,
Something I don't do often,
And you don't take notice.
You say you want to be friends,
But your actions don't show it at all.
Maybe it's me,
Maybe I analyze to much,
But do you blame me?
With everything I've been through
Including you!
I'm never good enough for anyone,
Everyone always has someone else in mind.
Including you?
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Copyright 2003 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, September 18, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on " Am I good enough for anyone??"
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A former member wrote:
Can I **please** take this to therapy? It'd save so much explanation time =P. No, honestly, this is very well written... I can't tell you how much I relate. Nicely done!
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On Sunday, July 18, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue
(42)
wrote:
holy mother mary...how many times i have felt this same emotion yet not had the words with witch to describe...very beautiful and true write
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A former member wrote:
i like this a lot, awesome flow and it says all the right things
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A former member wrote:
*sniff* Don't worry...I think we all feel this way at one point or another. Just remember that you are worthy of someone good.
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On Monday, December 29, 2003, Mr King
(547) wrote:
You're more than good enough... Someone worthy will come along... :~)
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On Wednesday, December 24, 2003, Tracer
(100) wrote:
Hmm, seems most can relate to this, as can I, so straight forward, refreshing in a way...^vTracerv^
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On Tuesday, December 23, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
.. wow
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On Saturday, December 20, 2003, Drea
(1443) wrote:
this hit me deep. my head is still spinning. this is what i'm going through. your words flow with sorrow and longing ~Drea~
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Yes what Hellsend said. Its not a good feel. Damn, I hope you get better response then this from him, from now. Tiger
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On Thursday, October 9, 2003, HeLlSeND
(40) wrote:
i so felt this...struck a chord way to close to my heart....great write
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On Saturday, October 4, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Wow... I Used To Be Like This... But My Constant Pushing Away Has Left Me Truly Alone. Don't Push Away. GPhD.
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On Sunday, September 28, 2003, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
God can i relate to this...i know how you feel...sometimes if someone keeps puttin up barriers u have to walk away...~katie~
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A former member wrote:
I think this is one of your best. Well written and i love how it's left as a question.
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On Friday, September 19, 2003, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
nice write, you're improving alot :) i hope you take the chance sometime to talk *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Thursday, September 18, 2003, worm
(1194) wrote:
I say screw him... find someone who will love you for just being yourself! don't waste your time on a losing situation...
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A former member wrote:
very nice, yeah i know the feeling of never feeling good enough it really sux, thanks for sharing
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On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Nightmare
(24) wrote:
I know what you mean.. nice write.. good luck with him. - Lee ^_^
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On Thursday, September 18, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i hear u my dear nice job, i say call him and dont let him hang up on u this time nice write
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