two bottles down

By molock

this bottle of patron,

 
 
​is my only friend.

 
 
if i was this far down,

 
 
....i can't remember

 
 
when.

 
 
take three shots,

 
 
start all over again.

 
 
two bottles down,

 
 
six sheets to the wind...

 
 
 

 
 
tryin' to drown my soul,

 
 
it's gonna take some time.

 
 
on a carousel,

 
 
with a little salt and lime.

 
 
 

 
 
im so stoned,

 
 
none of this makes any

 
 
sense...

 
 
two bottles of patron,

 
 
...every day since you

 
 
left.

 
 
with the devil as my

 
 
witness,

 
 
...i repent.

 
 
take three shots,

 
 
start all over again...

 
 
 

 
 
woke up,

 
 
with an empty bottle

 
 
in my hand.

 
 
must have blacked

 
 
out,

 
 
...can't remember

 
 
when.

 
 
take three shots,

 
 
start all over again.

 
 
two bottles down,

 
 
six sheets to the wind..

 
 
 

 
 
tryin' to drown my

 
 
soul,

 
 
it's gonna take

 
 
some time.

 
 
on a carousel,

 
 
with a little salt

 
 
and lime....

 
 
 

 
 
 

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Copyright 2017 molock
Published on Thursday, January 19, 2017.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Lyrics"
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  • A former member wrote: Such an amazing piece thank you for creating this.

  • Insatiable On Saturday, January 7, 2017, Insatiable (43)By person wrote:

    Incredible piece. Well rhymed and beautiful timing. Loved it. Xx insatiable

  • molock On Wednesday, January 11, 2017, molock (312)By person wrote:

    thank you for the kind words my dear. cheers. mo


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