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Sunset Chaos Marvel
By Ortolan
Underlord walks out among the decay
quiet surveying the torn
human race
sweep away all trace of toiled
mundane
leaveing reality unused clay
Lucifer rises disrobing again
slowly dismantling all works
of man
Brilliant one shining destroying
what's left
Sacred the masterpiece hewn
by the cleft
Shadow removing the veil
of illusion
shallow words fall by the
realm of confusion
shells of the demons gone,
shells of the dead
chief of the Motherlord's
tide at the helm
Overlord brightly deserves
disarray
karma sewn righteous there's
nothing to take
Mastermind godless creates
in his way
give over all his material
grace
Pantheon marvels from land
and from sky
retinue travels both faster
than light
dreams had in secret unravel
by time
have a good evening, enjoy
the sublime
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Copyright 2016 Ortolan
Published on Thursday, February 18, 2016.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
metaphor of self among othersComments on "Sunset Chaos Marvel"
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On Tuesday, March 1, 2016, themasterhunter
(43)
wrote:
I really liked the whole thing. the imagery was great.
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On Tuesday, March 1, 2016, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Thank you - Å’
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On Friday, February 26, 2016, Void Vortex
(303) wrote:
Sublime indeed. An undeniable usurping flow of overwhelming power. LIKE!
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On Monday, February 29, 2016, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Thank you very much for reading - Å’
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A former member wrote:
The poem had a good flow but kind of fell off at the end. I feel like the last two sentences of the poem should rhyme though. Its a simple fix considering the amount of words that you can rhyme with day. Well done over all. Its catchy.
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On Thursday, February 18, 2016, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
After reading it again I decided to change day to evening in the last stanza and also the words the last two lines end with.Thanks for the tip. - Å’
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A former member wrote:
Nice ending. It seems complete
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