Gasping Voice

By 101darkraven

I hear the sound of a gasping voice in my ear.
So angelic and ever so sweet...some how that voice
seems to be calling my name i better hurry
before it quickly fades away.

I try to run and run but somehow my feet failed
to do so.

But since they won't move i guess i'll just try
to sprout my wings out and try to fly.
A sudden smile appears on my face for i'm
now aware that i'm flying into the sky.

The beautiful sunlight kissing my skin ah..
the warmth.
The beauty.
It feels me with joy.
I can finally now feel the
freedom that i once had.

It feels like i have no idea.
It feels good to be able to touch the
clouds with my bare hands.

As i close my eyes i see nothing at all..no worries no
regrets.
I love this feeling i don't want it to end.
For i do understand that my adventure is now
beginning.

My heart starts to beat.
My mind is raging with new thoughts.
I just can't contain my excitement.

It's unbearable.
Oh happiness embrace me with your gentel touch.
Let fates arms embrace me.
Make my worries melt away.

The sky smiles at me.
Make me believe there
is hope in this relam i live in.
Make me believe that there's
no such thing as destruction.

Make me believe life is worth cherishing.
For i don't understand what happiness is.
Will you help me reach my fate?

That's my question for you.
Now i'm waiting for your response....

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Published on Tuesday, November 17, 2015. Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Gasping Voice "

On Tuesday, June 2, 2020, Divine hell (238) wrote:

I enjoyed this until I got to the end then I fell in love with it. The sky smiles at me. Make me believe there is hope in this relam i live in. Make me believe that there's no such thing as destruction. Make me believe life is worth cherishing. For i don't understand what happiness is. Will you help me reach my fate? That's my question for you. Now i'm waiting for your response.... Perfect ending 10
On Tuesday, June 5, 2018, Jonas Robinson (848) wrote:

This is so easy to relate to. It's very soothing, with an ease to cherish.
A former member wrote: I think there are few poems about humans flapping their arms , attempting to fly-we have all tried that in our early years.I liked this poem for reminding me of that. But the big question posed in this poem seems unanswerable.
On Tuesday, November 24, 2015, Livingdeadgirl (57) wrote:

very well structured, i especially enjoy the life you breathed into the work, a true master piece in its own right, BRAVO!
On Wednesday, November 25, 2015, 101darkraven (56) wrote:

thank you so much!
On Monday, November 23, 2015, soul_versing (774) wrote:

confinement to a self-made prison is common and I can appreciate that moment when enough-is-enough. Not wallowing in the darkness, and then choosing the optimistic approach... invigorating. Truly a great piece that you have written here. Hello there poet, and welcome to the valley. -Write on
On Wednesday, November 25, 2015, 101darkraven (56) wrote:

thank you i'm very glad to know that you enjoyed it.
On Friday, November 20, 2015, 101darkraven (56) wrote:

thanx i really needed to hear that not alot of people compliment on my writing skills most people say i copy but i don't.
A former member wrote: Soar... Soar to greater heights and unleash the emotion that we as humans try so hard to contain. You are not alone in the world my friend.. We're all brothers... Sisters and family here. We're privileged to have you express these thoughts to us. You write well with great emphasis on the chosen topic... Such talent should not be wasted. Let the fire that resides within you burn bright and shine a light for you to follow. Let the warmth blanket you in sweet bliss and bring a smile to your face. Thank you for this piece, if you ever need a friend to talk to.. We're here for you. You have a voice that deserves to be heard, so let it be heard.