Huge Ammends for Buying Chinese

By Ortolan

 this one will fix everything
 every apology and every appeasing
 trust there is no excuse, for I have helped myself
 exiled to dust and to be alone and shelved
 the bones were knocked on the ground
 
Korean news-stand said: 'lit gasoline screaming from all five orifice'

 I must go abroad to find new forms of torture

 I must travel in time to find the cure for humans
believing you can fix it later
try your best not to mutate
the face refuses to stay the same
try your best to dismiss gravity

no one knows who I am
ruined, rebuilding and not recommended

they say run away and be scared
rotten, reloaded, and laid to rest

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Copyright 2015 Ortolan
Published on Tuesday, March 3, 2015.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"

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  • Jessica Orr On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Jessica Orr (30)By person wrote:

    I liked it alot. You capture the arrogance and locked ritual of man's folly. I really like your writing style in general as I have perused some of your other works.

  • Ortolan On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    I appreciate the appreciation of such a fine poet as yourself.

  • Ortolan On Friday, March 6, 2015, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    That's why they make them taste bad, you can choose to bite off a tiny piece only if it's a good fortune.I know you know that.Thank you my friend. =)

  • heinzlet On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, heinzlet (25)By person wrote:

    You're something else Ortolan, every time I read a poem of yours I just feel like as if I read some life-changing book haha, thanks for sharing these little treasures... they've never disappointed me:) (btw, not sure if my English went stealthy this time so sorry if I made a mistake XD)

  • Ortolan On Wednesday, March 4, 2015, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    All went well and all is good, it takes resources in food and such to burn but I feel it is well spent.Thank you, thank you.

  • A former member wrote: I must travel in time to find the cure for humans. Brilliant line.

  • Ortolan On Wednesday, March 4, 2015, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    A thousand appreciations, V soul.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Interesting piece! I loved the title! Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Ortolan On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, Ortolan (214)By person wrote:

    Always a pleasure, TS.Thanks for reading.

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