Huge Ammends for Buying Chinese
By Ortolan
this one will fix everything
every apology and every appeasing
trust there is no excuse, for I have helped myself
exiled to dust and to be alone and shelved
the bones were knocked on the ground
Korean news-stand said: 'lit gasoline screaming from all five orifice'
I must go abroad to find new forms of torture
I must travel in time to find the cure for humans
believing you can fix it later
try your best not to mutate
the face refuses to stay the same
try your best to dismiss gravity
no one knows who I am
ruined, rebuilding and not recommended
they say run away and be scared
rotten, reloaded, and laid to rest
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On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Jessica Orr
(30) wrote:
I liked it alot. You capture the arrogance and locked ritual of man's folly. I really like your writing style in general as I have perused some of your other works.
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On Saturday, March 7, 2015, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
I appreciate the appreciation of such a fine poet as yourself.
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On Friday, March 6, 2015, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
That's why they make them taste bad, you can choose to bite off a tiny piece only if it's a good fortune.I know you know that.Thank you my friend. =)
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On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, heinzlet
(25) wrote:
You're something else Ortolan, every time I read a poem of yours I just feel like as if I read some life-changing book haha, thanks for sharing these little treasures... they've never disappointed me:) (btw, not sure if my English went stealthy this time so sorry if I made a mistake XD)
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On Wednesday, March 4, 2015, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
All went well and all is good, it takes resources in food and such to burn but I feel it is well spent.Thank you, thank you.
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A former member wrote:
I must travel in time to find the cure for humans. Brilliant line.
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On Wednesday, March 4, 2015, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
A thousand appreciations, V soul.
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On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Interesting piece! I loved the title! Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, March 3, 2015, Ortolan
(214) wrote:
Always a pleasure, TS.Thanks for reading.