Just a Moment

Rushing
Rushing
Rushing around
What simple pleasures I have found
Admist this rush
A gentle hush
See silence is its own sweet sound

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Published on Tuesday, November 11, 2014. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Just a Moment "

On Thursday, April 7, 2016, tmanzano (207) wrote:

Clever... I love the quick punch. I like it.
A former member wrote: what a place of peace - amidst the busyness and commotion of life, silence is a sweet sound indeed! :)
A former member wrote: Saying so much with an economy of words. I have always been fascinated with the idea that the first word we hear in life is "Push." Not much changes after that. This is concise and incredibly meaningful. Very, very well done.
On Thursday, November 20, 2014, bpathos (77) wrote:

Not all truth is long drawn out layers of complexity, some are as simple as this. The art of conciseness is. A well thought out sentence is worth more than a book of babble. Well done.
A former member wrote: Short and sweet. I love this. We too often try to hard to analyze the joys of life. Let live, let love. Welcome to DP â™¥