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Culture
By HeLlSeND
Dark and twisted- Wasted cells
Childhood, missed it- Raised in hell
Musta slipped, destined to fail
Pistol gripped, ready to bail
Mass confusion bringing rage
Disillusioned shrinking cage
Crumbles in upon a soul
Mumbles sin as dark as coal
See the truth for all the lies
Be the proof with blinded eyes
Attack facts to show their fiction
Buy fat sacks to ease addiction
Live a life of pure disgrace
Destroy strife and find a place
Where peace is all there is to see
Disease is all that comes for free
Love and joy once were nice
Broken toys and melted ice
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Copyright 2003 HeLlSeND
Published on Saturday, August 30, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Look, you're already popular...make yourself at home. Just don't let it go to your head! J/K...again...I really like this poem also.
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, _Andrew_
(245)
wrote:
nice write, i agree, beautiful flow, welcome to DP *~*aNDReW*~*
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
well bravo for finding a new home here. And yes your poetry does belong with us. Mahaha! *snickers* ~gothic~
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On Sunday, August 31, 2003, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
mm...I want a snickers...and to you, little hellsend, perfect flow and rhyme scheme and as bwb said, the structure greatly enhanced the concept...brava and welcome!
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A former member wrote:
wonderful. dave's write, you'll fit in here perfectly. keep posting, please, i am really eager to see what you post next. \m/
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On Saturday, August 30, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
I agree with the boys...I like this piece...great flow and the contrast of words adds much..Welcome to DP!
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A former member wrote:
as BWB said, excellent, and you will fit here perfectly, flows wonderfully and very fitting
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A former member wrote:
excellent. the structure enhanced the concept, instead of cramping it, which i see so often on this site. well written.
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