.*Wicked Women*.

By Deathkitten

Wicked women
and their empty eyes
Come back for more
as the wounded cry
out beneath the stars
into the moonlit night
Inebriated & satisfied
'til sun-up
where they lay to rest
'til evening hours
Longing to indulge
in lust & cigarettes
In the dark
their silhouettes
make love to bare walls
with no regret
leaving sheets of cotton
full of sin & sweat
thus forming memories
they cannot forget

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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Thursday, June 27, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • blue angel On Sunday, June 30, 2013, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    leaving sheets of cotton full of sin and sweat... (every line has a seductiveness feel) I like how you enhance the beauty in something otherwise filthy* Nice write ~^_^~

  • Deathkitten On Sunday, June 30, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Enhancing filth...yes ma'am I sure do haha thank you :)

  • poe_lover28 On Saturday, June 29, 2013, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    Loved the flow. And the imagery captured. Very dark a dirty feeling. How nice. (:

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Dark & dirty huh? I guess i'm good for that lmao thanks, Brea :)

  • A former member wrote: Not enough 'wicked' women as it is, I wonder if they would enjoy playing my game? Kick ass write DK.

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Not enough wicked? I suppose you're right. Can never be enough wicked! What game might that be? Thanks, Cam.

  • A former member wrote: I read of ladies of the night in this poem it has a sad tone to me of these ladies and their lives that they must endure. It is a moving piece well done Craig

  • Deathkitten On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Thanks for reading me :)

  • haunted On Friday, June 28, 2013, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    oh jess, im in so much need of a woman like this, this sounds to me like the perfect one night stand. a woman of the night to come make my fantasies a reality. this is a beautiful poem and in my eyes a tribute to the gorgeous ladies that wait in the shadows. with my luck though they would be lesbians, damn! I loved it, awesome!

  • Deathkitten On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    The wicked ladies of the night mhmm haha i'm sure they're not all lesbos. Thanks, Todd. I'm glad you liked it :)

  • A former member wrote: Good poem. Wishing you an inspired Friday! Cheers!

  • Deathkitten On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Shangri. Same to you :)

  • A former member wrote: these wicked women sound pretty badass haha, loved the write

  • Deathkitten On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Very much so. Thank you :)

  • A former member wrote: This is hot hot!!!! Enjoyed reading. Make love to bare walls mmmmm.

  • Deathkitten On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten (571)By person wrote:

    Haha thanks, Devil :)

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