.*Wicked Women*.
By Deathkitten
Wicked women
and their empty eyes
Come back for more
as the wounded cry
out beneath the stars
into the moonlit night
Inebriated & satisfied
'til sun-up
where they lay to rest
'til evening hours
Longing to indulge
in lust & cigarettes
In the dark
their silhouettes
make love to bare walls
with no regret
leaving sheets of cotton
full of sin & sweat
thus forming memories
they cannot forget
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Thursday, June 27, 2013.
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On Sunday, June 30, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
leaving sheets of cotton full of sin and sweat... (every line has a seductiveness feel) I like how you enhance the beauty in something otherwise filthy* Nice write ~^_^~
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On Sunday, June 30, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Enhancing filth...yes ma'am I sure do haha thank you :)
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, poe_lover28
(163) wrote:
Loved the flow. And the imagery captured. Very dark a dirty feeling. How nice. (:
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Dark & dirty huh? I guess i'm good for that lmao thanks, Brea :)
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A former member wrote:
Not enough 'wicked' women as it is, I wonder if they would enjoy playing my game? Kick ass write DK.
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Not enough wicked? I suppose you're right. Can never be enough wicked! What game might that be? Thanks, Cam.
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A former member wrote:
I read of ladies of the night in this poem it has a sad tone to me of these ladies and their lives that they must endure. It is a moving piece well done Craig
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Thanks for reading me :)
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
oh jess, im in so much need of a woman like this, this sounds to me like the perfect one night stand. a woman of the night to come make my fantasies a reality. this is a beautiful poem and in my eyes a tribute to the gorgeous ladies that wait in the shadows. with my luck though they would be lesbians, damn! I loved it, awesome!
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
The wicked ladies of the night mhmm haha i'm sure they're not all lesbos. Thanks, Todd. I'm glad you liked it :)
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A former member wrote:
Good poem. Wishing you an inspired Friday! Cheers!
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Thanks, Shangri. Same to you :)
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A former member wrote:
these wicked women sound pretty badass haha, loved the write
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Very much so. Thank you :)
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A former member wrote:
This is hot hot!!!! Enjoyed reading. Make love to bare walls mmmmm.
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On Friday, June 28, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Haha thanks, Devil :)