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ignored screams
By poe_lover28
all is silent
but my cries
im too reliant
a piece of me dies
tears down my cheeks
my eyes cream jade
the volume now peaks
my screams like a blade
they cut into your ears
but you dont care
you ignore what you hear
just look, and stare
my hair is pulled
my nails dig deep
my screams cannot be dueled
continue my hysterical weep
funny how i feel so alone
but you're standing right here
so far away, yet so near
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Copyright 2013 poe_lover28
Published on Tuesday, June 25, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, Deviated09
(90)
wrote:
Very few know what it's like to be surrounded by love yet not be more alone.. I regret being able to relate so closely to this piece. excellent write! Nothing ever comes to be a better writing than something from the heart.
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A former member wrote:
It's better be lonely on your own that being lonely with someone, or so they say. Very sad piece Brea, with a forlorn feel to it.
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
I suppose it is Cam. Thank you, your commenta are alwaya very well
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
The suffocation that comes with those shrieks of silence is portrayed very well in this piece. Great read :)
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Much thanks (:
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On Tuesday, June 25, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(334) wrote:
I've felt this! there's nothing worse than feeling so alone when someone who is supposed to care about you is right there with you. Very well written xoxo
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
I'm sorry you have also felt this my friend. I am here if you want someone to talk to. Thank you xoxo
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On Tuesday, June 25, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Completely relatable & it sucks to feel in such a way that most others are oblivious to.
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Yes it does hurt. And most haven't felt this you are right.
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A former member wrote:
I like how the emotion was expressed especially near the ending.
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Thank you a lot (:
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On Tuesday, June 25, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
That's the way it goes when the parting becomes a bittersweet sorrow, time to cut your losses maybe - cheers PL28!
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On Wednesday, June 26, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Ahh I have cut my losses. Definitely dwells. Thank you very much.
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