Make Your Way

By Deathkitten

And so it begins
in a sense of wonder
So many questions to ponder
Followed by recognition
that things are
not always as they seem
A speculum
A ring
A car
Existing in objects
Some valuable thing
Are you focused
or are you not?
Time fills up
those empty slots
Contrasts & comparisons
A mind wasn't always there for them
To do what you are told
until you are old
enough..
When is "enough", enough?
Reality...
Fantasy...
Fiction...
Friction...
Upon birth
we're decaying
Praying...
Delaying..
Can you make your way
without listening
to what others are saying?

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Published on Wednesday, May 29, 2013. Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Popping the fucking cork..

Comments on "Make Your Way"

A former member wrote: Can I be your fantasy? I'll make my way to you lol
On Saturday, June 1, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

I've a feeling you might get lost, but you can try. Maybe ;)
A former member wrote: Seems to be 3 types of value in life: Personal value, monetary value, and mental value. People choose which ones they prefer the most I suppose. Very interesting write.
On Friday, May 31, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

That is true. Thank you
On Thursday, May 30, 2013, haunted (837) wrote:

this is really cool jess! your rhyming and timing is perfect throughout. I love your views in this, some good stuff in there. awesome!
On Thursday, May 30, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Yes...i am one cool cat ahaha thanks Todd :)
A former member wrote: perfect piece... what I would give to live in a world where "things" are seen as just "things"... beautiful flow throughout.
On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Mhmm thank you :)