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Just A Little Bit Of Life
By andhaka
I wish to breathe just a single breath
A moment of life before death
To elevate before impending degression
Feeling joy before returning depression
To break through water resting above
All I need is a benevolent shove
A Sliver of light in a shadowed cave
Just a beautiful memory to take to grave
I wish for clarity amid heavy mist
To stop the blood flow from my wrist
I pray for tears, to not be so numb
To change the person I have become
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Copyright 2013 andhaka
Published on Friday, May 24, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, dwells
(4177)
wrote:
The change must come from within, but then you already know that. Thanks for sharing this stark and lonely slice of life (pun intended) - cheers!
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Change is something that everyone wants, but not all can achieve no matter how desperately they try . Thanks for the comment : )
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, bobbery
(119) wrote:
great piece. pain, agony, a bit of hope
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thank you : )
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A former member wrote:
Amazing how far just a little help and kindness can go. A nice hopeful piece.
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Yeah it's always nice to have a helping in hand in times of need. Thanks for commenting : )
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...it's a fine prayer, nicely crafted...
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thank you
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is wonderful! I love the flow and word choices. :)
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On Friday, May 24, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.
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