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Masquerade
By andhaka
Blemished souls scattered around
Broken angles do abound
Tinted from belligerent past
Genuine sentiment they have masked
Subdued spirits wither away
Eloquent disguises start to decay
Unconsciously living in a masquerade
Lost and alone through life they wade.
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Copyright 2013 andhaka
Published on Saturday, April 27, 2013.
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"Poetry"
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On Monday, August 21, 2017, Allen
(156)
wrote:
We all wear mask. Even if we dont realize is. Nice write
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On Monday, August 21, 2017, worm
(1149) wrote:
very nice... come back and write some more!
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A former member wrote:
This is a great pen, I really like this.. I can relate for sure. Nicely done! 10/10
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this : )
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A former member wrote:
Broken angles do abound would be grammatically correct. I like the notion that , in time, true identities wither away, and different guises/disguises cover the trail. A nicely-conceived poem.
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
oh you're right. I'll work on my grammar for next time. thanks for the tip and comment :)
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Many sleepwalk through life wearing masks... I often wonder what exactly was destroyed in the world to make so many not want to live aware in our world...so many answers I can't find the true culprit. Nice pen, not to lengthy, and flows easily. Welcome to the valley, I look forward to reading more of you - XXOO
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
Thank you so much, and i totally agree. I think most people don't realize that we're all just hiding behind disguises. Everyone feels alone and abandoned, yet there are so many people around dealing with things similar to them.
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A former member wrote:
Good title and good pen. Love the words you used and the images you created
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On Saturday, April 27, 2013, andhaka
(168) wrote:
thank you so much : )
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