xxxRainxxx

By RoseTheBrokenHearted

 Rest in peace. Four nineteen.
 The worst part of a movie scene.
For poor beautiful Rain,
Ending everything; Including his well-hidden pain.'
He hadn't meant to bring his death,
Be he was lost as he took his last breath;
It slowly slipped away,
It sadly wasn't his choice not to stay.
Death did his deed,
But only out of greed.
He cut wat too deep,
And went forever into his eternal sleep.
Soon you won't be alone,
Sissy and I won;t leave you all your own.
We forgive you, you tried your best,
But still ended up failing life's fucked up test.
No one is perfect,
But you, my friend, were worth it.
We won't forget you,
 But at the moment there is nothing we can do. 

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Copyright 2012 RoseTheBrokenHearted
Published on Saturday, December 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

xxxRainxxx May you rest in peace, my friend. Here EMOheart.
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  • Jonas Robinson On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    Nicely penned. I like the symbol of rain. It touched my insides. :)

  • Lothbrok On Tuesday, September 4, 2018, Lothbrok (12)By person wrote:

    I remember when you all started here, Brandi and I were enjoying the company and watching you all write in a site that was flourishing, so odd to think that the time has passed for more than one of us.

  • A former member wrote: The pain is too real at times we all have our breaking point. Very well written.-Mrk

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, December 8, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    wow lovely verse. great flow, lovely melancholy theme.

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