autumn man
By dumbone
She undressed my soul
In front of a mirror of gold
I stood naked
Newborn
As the leaves fall
I saw how she undresses
The trees
And they stand in rows
Sadly swaying as the wind blows
That is beauty
The autumn of the old
Pale colors
Of something that was bright before
And I am that sad little man
Sitting on a bench
Watching
As the world changes
And she is painting
The shades of the clouds
Above the head
Of an autumn man
A man who admires
To everything
that she does
...nature...
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Copyright 2012 dumbone
Published on Monday, September 17, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "autumn man"
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A former member wrote:
Thank you so much for this one. Its´utterly beautiful. SO sad and I can relate to that lil man...keep writing.
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...a wonderful image, pleasantly plaintive...
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On Wednesday, September 19, 2012, dumbone
(62) wrote:
thank you sir...
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On Monday, September 17, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Aweeeee hello there you. long time no see..
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On Wednesday, September 19, 2012, dumbone
(62) wrote:
oh I'm here, thank you for commenting :)