Destiny Consumption
By Dilated View
Distracting classes
With theories of grasses greener
Where
the purchased distraction
Conditions esteem
Observing
clashes
With wisdom and fashion
While feeding the
masses
The Manifest dream
Pride meet
Ailing
sky
Tame tendency;
Rise to devise by
Improving design
while
Our prismatic entropy
Thrives in disguise
Gauging distinction
By leaping lasting lethal gaps
Where
those blinded by freedom
Eat revellers of reason
Destiny
dealers
Invented the season
Of consume our vision
Or hang you for treason
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Copyright 2012 Dilated View
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On Sunday, September 8, 2019, Hope in despair
(121) wrote:
Beautiful structure to this poem! It's so true they want to produce robots to go in the herd. Individuality and imagination are shunned.
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Beautifully poetic and well said, though the truth it highlights is horribly ugly and pathetic. We all need to do our part to bring honor back to the stars and stripes ;) - XXOO
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On Thursday, August 30, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
You win. This is incredible.
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On Thursday, August 30, 2012, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
There are many things about this that I like. I don't want to particularly rip each gem down to here, so I will start with the first stanza: what I enjoy about great writers is the ability to take common saying and re-paint them with their own words. It's a resurrection. I will never thing of "grass is greener" without thinking of that stance. I think that is the mark of a great writer.