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My SwEeT POISON
By EMOheart
Poison...
Runs through
my veins...
Burning...
Sweet searing pain...
Agony...
Familiar old sensation...
Welcomes...
To a world of my creation...
Darkness...
All
that lights the sky...
Blood...
Taints waters
as you die...
Haunting...
Melodies play a
cryptic song...
Listen...
For once your here
it wont be long...
Scream,,,
While you try
and take cover...
Fall...
Now Death is your
eternal lover...
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Copyright 2012 LUNA
Published on Thursday, April 19, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
I understand this is probably not my best work but please bare with me...Comments on "My SwEeT POISON"
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A former member wrote:
I would LOVE to know your methods for creative writing O.O -John (Vocalist)
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On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, EMOheart
(20)
wrote:
I dont exactly have a method that I follow. I just write what comes to me...most of the times I base it on my emotions...or my thoughts....or my life. It varys lol I rarely revise my works because the originals normally preserve the emotions reflected when created.
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A former member wrote:
love it beautiful :)
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On Wednesday, December 5, 2012, EMOheart
(20) wrote:
Thank you dear :)
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On Saturday, July 21, 2012, Melancholic VIncent
(429) wrote:
It's interesting. Expression can take many forms. It's always a good thing when we express something real. I really enjoyed it. Really liked the last line. "Now Death is your eternal lover...."
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A former member wrote:
This is really good Emo :)
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On Thursday, April 19, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Interesting work and enjoyed the format. Not sure if your author's note should be "bear" with me maybe? HMmm.. somebody else probably knows for sure. Keep your poison sweet, cheers!
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On Thursday, April 19, 2012, Loketha Angel
(159) wrote:
That is quite the question.... bear vs bare. Either way. I thought this was a decent work. Thanks!
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On Thursday, April 19, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
This is awesome.. your rhyme and delivery is perfect sweety.. im proud of you.
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