Out of hiding

This moment is here...
never ending..
becoming.
this moment..
I Imagine...
pieces of me...
you are these moments...
complete

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Published on Saturday, March 10, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Out of hiding "

On Monday, August 12, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

Beautiful piece! I like the way this is structured and enjoyed reading it in varying order - nice job! Hope all is well with you! Ciao, T/S
A former member wrote: Very well worded but sometimes you just have to offend someone for them to get the point. ][ ][
A former member wrote: I'm not sure how else to comment than, much appreciated
On Sunday, March 11, 2012, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

Thank you Vex
On Saturday, March 10, 2012, blue (1409) wrote:

I have read this two ways: firstly, what a beautiful sentiment you have created here (if I am reading this correctly) ...a confession, a declaration to the other, to love, the completion of ones self through the recognition that the 'being' of you exists through and within another... and secondly, more on my own personal viewing, I see this as an embracing of ones completeness, after a long and intensive journey to the heart of ones true being, the pieces have finally been unified, or perhaps the unessentials have been hacked away until the true form has been revealed, and set free to simply be, to exist in the present moment without clinging to the past or reaching for the future...... a pure and unobstructed movement through the now. Simple and brilliant. I love it. ~b
On Saturday, March 10, 2012, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

Thank you Blue