I hate untitled poems but I have no name for this

By ThuggingWithMyFannyPack

Is this dark enough?

Punctual punctuation marks

Needles like alliterations

So repetitive

Who needs E?

Shoot some XYZ, get higher than an apostrophe

and come fly away with me

Is this dark enough?

Blazing blades and

Dalliances with the Dali Lama

Cutting deeper than commas

Oh for grammar’s sake!

Stop looking for reason

In the mind of the fucking lunatic

And learn to lean like italics

Is this dark enough?

Heinous hayrides

With Jack the fucking Ripper

He’ll tattoo a semi colon

Right through your chest

Where mechanical hearts bleed

Cue laughter from the peanut gallery

Throwing asterisks at the stage

Take a bow bitch, we’re all glad you’re done

Now tell me darling, is this dark enough for you?

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Published on Monday, February 27, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "I hate untitled poems but I have no name for this"

On Tuesday, February 2, 2016, carlosjackal (3011) wrote:

Crazy, clever poetics loaded with wicked humour..And that "title" is ingenious whether intentional or not...A perfect fit to the irreverence of the content. Bloody brilliant.
A former member wrote: "Who needs E? Shoot some XYZ, get higher than an apostrophe and come fly away with me" I don't even know why, but this struck me as one of the best sentences I have ever read. If this is how you deal with your anger, my selfish little self thinks you should get angry more often. Simply exquisite.
On Sunday, November 24, 2013, Lux (299) wrote:

I literally wrote this poem down in my journal so I would never forget it in case he deleted it to make room or something. I forgot to book mark it on my way back in with a new name. Shall remedy now.
A former member wrote: Excellent...laughter from the peanut gallery---here you go.
On Friday, March 2, 2012, dwells (4285) wrote:

Loving the metaphors and thoroughly enjoyed, but the last stanza seemed to have an ulterior motive perhaps, still pondering, thanks.
A former member wrote: This is going to sound strange, but I want to lick your fucking brain. I am now inspired. Shall write a poem about you, yes...
On Thursday, March 1, 2012, Alchemist (688) wrote:

This is the laughter from the peanut gallery, out fucking standing work.
On Monday, February 27, 2012, Devilish (2658) wrote:

Sweeeeeeet.. And no this isnt dark enough fpr me but i can refer you to someone that is .. Read SilentStalker ..the stalker.. that is dark.. never the less ii love your writting and cant wait to see more.. welcome to Darkpoetry.. roam around and read others as it wil bring them back around to you as well.. dont be shy,
On Monday, February 27, 2012, Magdalena (615) wrote:

Stitches, ellipsis on flesh, slash the bracket, Evil drips..... A very clever write, nicely done.
On Monday, February 27, 2012, grantrizmo2002 (17) wrote:

Lol..I got it. Nice ..