how to spot defeat.
By jodeanna
She's
Broken.
Defeated.
You can tell by the way
she tilts her pale chin,
scarred from years of abuse,
up just
a little bit too far
to be believable.
You can tell by
the way
her thin lips quiver violently
as she curls her shoulders
into her ribcage when
he calls her name.
"Lucille!"
You can tell by the way
fear briefly flashes across
her
otherwise lifeless, verdant eyes
before she clears all emotion
from them and runs to him.
You can tell by the way
she
tightens her body as if
preparing for an incoming blow
and
cowers like a frightened pup
the moment she reaches his side.
You can tell by the way
she stands there silently,
body
shuddering slightly as the
tears stream down her face
as his
fists pound into her.
You can tell by the way
that she
cries so quietly
as she examines the bruises
while cleansing
water pours over her
as she sits on the shower floor.
You
can tell by the way
that she never tries to
stand up for herself
or make a break
while he sleeps.
She's
Broken.
Defeated.
Author's Note:
This is for all the women (and men!) who suffer from domestic abuse, child abuse, or any other kind. There IS help available. I know that it seems scary and impossible to get away from but you can do it! Things can always get better.Comments on "how to spot defeat."
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On Friday, February 17, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Forgive my levity on the title but I can't resist: pull the covers up as far as you can and then see what i sticking out at the opposite end (da feet) HA! Cheers (I'm bad)
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On Thursday, February 16, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Jo, this is brutal in its reality, written to cause a clenching & repulsion in the gut...you get your point across 100%...
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On Thursday, February 16, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
and I can imagine how you felt when you wrote it...
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On Saturday, February 25, 2012, jodeanna
(41) wrote:
Thank you for your words. It wasn't easy to write but it needed to be said.
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On Thursday, February 16, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Very heartfelt and inspired message, thanks for the offering, cheers!