What you do to me.

By Binxster

All day I thought about it.
All day I could see it.
All day I saw it happening.

When the time came.
When I was able.
When the resources were there.

I couldn't see it.
I couldn't pick it up.
I couldn't do it.

My pencil laid still.
My pad unmarked any further.
My blueprint for you, unchanged.

Your influence un-edges me.
Your energy unbinds me.
Your soul completes me.

As two, we become one.




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Copyright 2012 Binxster
Published on Tuesday, January 31, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

For Goldie.
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  • Lux On Wednesday, July 9, 2014, Lux (280)By person wrote:

    I will always love this poem.

  • dwells On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Perhaps "unhinges" instead of "un-edges" if I may be so bold. Quite lovely and enjoyed the writers block on the blueprint, thanks and well done!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...nicely presented...knowing honest love, & nothing more needs to be said...

  • darling93demon On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, darling93demon (81)By person wrote:

    beautiful :) thanks for sharing! great job!

  • With love_Crow On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, With love_Crow (82)By person wrote:

    The simple nature of this work runs deeper than words can express. I could feel the emotion beneath the underneath. Well done.

  • Devilish On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Awee,.. This is so beautiful and heartfelt.. =).. Scholar

  • Binxster On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Binxster (11)By person wrote:

    Thank you. :) Took a bit of time, and help from Goldie, but it all flowed together so well.

  • A former member wrote: Gracias. You know damned well I like it.

  • Binxster On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Binxster (11)By person wrote:

    :) I know you do, and am extremely happy you do.

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