dinner at Wendy's 8.34 p.m.

By nur hidayah

would that the world spin in
a different direction
warped to accommodate
a single moment
with a possible you.

 

the night, star-choked
violently romantic---
drenched in endings,
and you...
eyes closed to spare
that burning gaze,
breath eddying
as our lips almost graze,
unspoken sentences
leaving feather promises,
diffusing as
our silhouettes torched
untethered to our feet
because you always kiss
with your eyes wide open
our lashes fusing in frenzy
as our liquid souls meet.



would that the heavens see
the glorious impossibility
of you and me.
thus away from the fates
uncreate
our female bodies,
our cautious minds,
our fickle, fragile hearts,
leave us be
in our basest essence
to meld and burn
as a single entity
just for a perfect second
in this lawless infinity.




tick.

 

a blink.

 

you sit across the table
fork still in hand
disoriented, misplaced.

 

on a trembling
lower lip lingering
you lick
the after taste
of a never memory---
an invisible remnant

a smear of me.

 

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Copyright 2011 nur hidayah
Published on Wednesday, December 28, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, December 11, 2022, carlosjackal (3014)By person wrote:

    Delicious and perfectly imperfect. A giddying delight.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, November 20, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Another brilliant piece. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Solace On Friday, June 8, 2012, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Simple moments made melodious through the joy of beauty - delicate and delicious expression of ideas an imagined frenetic event with the contrast of the briefest movement - a monumentous thought played out in slow motion.

  • A former member wrote: always amazing reading your work

  • A former member wrote: this is so beautiful. "would that the heavens see the glorious impossibility of you and me." perfect imagery and stunning ending. I love how you turned something as simple as dinner at wendy's to something unique and beautiful.

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 1, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    Nur, the beauty of your spirit shows easily in your writing, a plane that many aspire to but few attain.

  • dwells On Wednesday, December 28, 2011, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    This makes me want to go to Wendy's right now and order a Grand Slam breakfast!. Sensuous and such a cosmic elegance portrayed in this piece. Great similie too, thanks and so well done.

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